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Embrace the Pain by ~nina-bruja:iconnina-bruja:

Categories Literature > Poetry > Old Poetry Structure > Dark




Rape me
Sedate me
Bend
And then break me...

Tighten your grip around me,
around my life,
Harder!
Let me see the bruise...

I display it like a badge of honor
It is my battle scar
A symbol of our love
The only thing you've left me
The only scar that they can see...

It's proof of you
Evidence of our affaire
The only truth I can find
Maybe now they'll beleive...

Come on,
Press into me again.
What's the matter?
Not as much fun with my permision?
©2004-2009 ~nina-bruja
:iconnina-bruja:

Author's Comments

Much darker than I ussually am....

UPDATE:

stock from ~Tigerlily-Stock

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~solitarysilence Mar 30, 2004, 7:50:03 PM
creepy, seductive.

It hurts me to read this! Is that your purpose, really? Is that what you're feeling...
anger or hurt or both?

It's good to write out these emotions rather than acting on them!

--
"A wonderful discovery-psychoanalysis. Makes quite simple people feel they're complex"
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~PeppermintDove Mar 30, 2004, 7:50:09 PM
Yes, I'd give that dark. But also interesting... I'm really not sure what I think of it... Very nice no matter what.

peace
Emily
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~nina-bruja Apr 1, 2004, 5:10:30 PM
Actually, I'm feeling neither. My friends relationship with her boyfirend and this book I was reading called "Drowning Anna" helped to create this. It's a really good book. You should check it out. The only problem is that I want to pop into the book and punch this one girl...

Anyways, many thanks for the comment
:iconnina-bruja:
~nina-bruja Apr 1, 2004, 5:13:27 PM
Thanks! Funny thing is that I was going to post a Haiku instead of this but I couldn't find out where I had saved it. Happy I chose to submit this instead ^_^

Hannah
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~AngryNoodleGirl Apr 11, 2004, 6:02:49 PM
hhmmm. i thought that i read your poe already.. but i guess tat i dint. i really like it.. its cool. makes me want to punch somone

--
try and smile
try and smile
try and smile
*stab w/butter knife*
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~nina-bruja Apr 12, 2004, 7:44:41 PM
Yes! Now only if I could put subliminal messages into the poem that would make them punch a certain person, people actually. So many people, I've noticed that many of them are politicians. Politicians and evil people who use other people...

:steaming: must supress grr...must supress grr

--
The power of Bruce Springsteen commands you to read my posts.
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~lesseroflindsey May 16, 2004, 1:51:27 PM
whoa the ending was a perfect one. Ver nice job!

--
I will write you like a book.
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~nina-bruja May 16, 2004, 2:38:04 PM
Thanks. I submitted this to the spring anthology, but I think that it's a bit too real to be published by the school. Stupid censorship.

--
The power of Bruce Springsteen commands you to read my posts.
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~ShadoDeathWeeper May 23, 2004, 4:10:44 PM
Love the picture and the poem, There very dark...+fav.
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~nina-bruja May 23, 2004, 4:40:26 PM
Thank you, it's one of my few deviations that I actually like.

--
It's just a jump to the left…

If nothing else, I've still got my hips.
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